Monday 30 october 2017
Persuasive writing:
Is sports more important than music?
I think sports and music is important, but my opinion i think sports is more important than music because when you play sports you exercise to keep fit and you keep healthy and you also make new friends. Sports helps people to inspire other people overcome being shy and helps people learn new things and get paid a lot of money and you can be proud to be playing for your country and traveling the country.
Most important thing is if you don't do exercise or play sport it would lead you to a lot of worlds problems like obesity. If you had a choice at your school, would you rather have a compulsory P.E system or a compulsory music system? Would you rather keep fit and healthy playing sport or confuse your brain by playing lots of complex notes on 10 different instruments?
Sports uses more teamwork and collaboration.